Love the 1st one and the use of circles. The dart board brings attention to the circular design on her shirt as well as the lights around her head. Brings the photo together.
The 3rd one down... I get a bit lost in the void of the bottom left corner. Does this void serve purpose or is it purely dead space. I think if this space held even a wee bit more detail it would strengthen the overall photo for me. But right now, it does not serve purpose of pleasing my eye. The middle is my personal fav. The placement of the figure allows me to relate him to three different spaces at once. Due to this, it allows me to ponder further about being in the place he is, why he was there, etc. Is he actually 3 different people rolled into one at that very moment? etc. Top one, great use of light...but I'm not getting too much of your style off this one. To me, my immediate relation is with religion, as a halo around her head. I won't argue, I think that this is a great solo photo, but for me there is too much of a forward sign here. The others make me ask a few more questions through subtle variations instead of such a forthright commentary, I suppose.
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Love the 1st one and the use of circles. The dart board brings attention to the circular design on her shirt as well as the lights around her head. Brings the photo together.
The 3rd one down... I get a bit lost in the void of the bottom left corner. Does this void serve purpose or is it purely dead space. I think if this space held even a wee bit more detail it would strengthen the overall photo for me. But right now, it does not serve purpose of pleasing my eye. The middle is my personal fav. The placement of the figure allows me to relate him to three different spaces at once. Due to this, it allows me to ponder further about being in the place he is, why he was there, etc. Is he actually 3 different people rolled into one at that very moment? etc. Top one, great use of light...but I'm not getting too much of your style off this one. To me, my immediate relation is with religion, as a halo around her head. I won't argue, I think that this is a great solo photo, but for me there is too much of a forward sign here. The others make me ask a few more questions through subtle variations instead of such a forthright commentary, I suppose.
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